<–The State of the Writer: 6/18/17 The State of the Writer: 7/2/17–>
A weekly post updated every Sunday discussing my current writing projects and where I stand with them. This will include any and all work(s) in progress (WIP) be they creative writing, essays/analyses, or reviews of any type.
Project: Story
Title: The Broken Rose
Genre: Paranormal Romance
Type: Fanfiction (FFVII) Novel
Current Word Count: 267,254
Prior Word Count: 267,565
Word Difference: -311
Status: Editing
Progress: 3rd edit of Chapter 10
When I finished the second edit, I realized I didn’t like the pacing of the chapter. Something was off. It was too long, too drawn out, too…something. I created an outline as I’d said I was planning last week in order to organize my thoughts and figure out what the chapter is supposed to accomplish. I won’t know how much it’s helped until I reedit and reorg then do yet another edit afterwards.
Right now I’m at a part that I need to change, and it’s amazing how something so simple as Sephiroth not taking off his coat can be complicated in writing. You have to make sure the text following takes that into account, and anything you miss could cause confusion or give away the fact that extensive changes were done. Even though we all know writers spend a great deal of their time editing, that being evident in the text breaks the illusion necessary to suspend disbelief.
Quote: I always wear a coat with lining whenever we go anywhere. In case you grow cold or are tired or frightened, I can just wrap you in this.”
Project: Book Review
Title: Silent Child
Author: Sarah A. Denzil
Status: Drafting
I’m deciding whether or not I’m going to do this review like I did the one for The Light of the Fireflies, where I split it into two parts. The first is the spoiler free review, and the second is where I have to spoil it to talk about specific points. I may be able to say what I need without doing the latter, but I’ll figure that out for sure when I have time to work on it again.
Project: Book Reviews
Title: Various
Status: Planning
I’m still five reviews behind even though I’ve completed or started two since my last weekly update. Saga: Volumes 4-6, A Court of Mist and Fury, and Half a King.
What are you currently working on? Is it a creative writing project, essay, review, or something else? Have you just started something new or are you wrapping up a long term project?
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Editing is indeed a delicate dance of words.
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Every action is complicated when you’re trying to show someone how it’s happening by just using words.
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I decided he wasn’t going to take his coat off, and now I have to make sure everything following from that makes sense lol. It’s like if you change one bit of a code, it could mess everything up. I learned that today watching a video about game hacks with the Game Genie!
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I’m excited for your review of Half a King. 🙂
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I almost put it aside, but then something huge happened, and I could barely put it down after that.
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I enjoyed it but was never in love with it so I haven’t been in a rush to get to the next one. One day. 🙂
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I wasn’t as interested in the second one either. I thought it would still be about the main character of the first Yarvi, but it isn’t.
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I didn’t know that. Now I’m interested even less lmao.
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Yeah I was kind of bummed out, but apparently the main character is a female warrior, so I think it might be worth my time. I was just thrown for a loop because I expected it to continue Yarvi’s story, but I suppose that’s pretty much come to an end.
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I don’t even remember how it ended. That’s probably a good indication on how I felt about it. I partially just want to your review so I can remember lol.
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I’m doing a public service!
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Exactly!
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